Today’s blog is the continuation of, Welcome to the Valleys. If you would like to catch up with the tale, the first section can be found at this link Jeremy was still sitting on the floor when the door opened and several people entered their rooms. “Jeremy!” burst Ama as she rushed to his side and knelt down. “Walter,…
Category: The Valleys
Unpacking Memory
My original plan was to begin this chapter with Jeremy experiencing his second dream. The length of “Capital Expressions” changed the plan, so he instead fell into the dream at the end of the first scene. This was fun because it allowed me to finish the scene by bringing him back into the waking world,…
Fiction Tuesday – Memory
Today’s blog is the continuation of, Welcome to the Valleys. If you would like to catch up with the tale, the first section can be found at this link Jeremy felt himself falling and landed roughly on to hard ground. His impact was so forceful he assumed he must be gravely injured, but to his surprise his body was…
Unpacking Risk Assessment
The Capital Expressions chapter felt like it was beginning to drag, so I determined to move the story forward and change the scenery. This was a fun section to write with Walter and Jeremy, and it marks the first extended conversation a character besides Jeremy has had with Sheilak. Let’s unpack. Satal’s reaction I like…
Fiction Tuesday – Risk Assessment
Today’s blog is the continuation of, Welcome to the Valleys. If you would like to catch up with the tale, the first section can be found at this link “Well lad, I can’t say you have a timid heart. That’s for certain.” Shortly after their interview with Satal Jeremy and Walter had been escorted to a set of rooms…
Unpacking Closed loop
It seems as though this interview is going on forever. I love the characters, but this chapter needs to come to an end so we can get to the Senate chamber. We might not get to see Satal’s reaction to Jeremy’s bombshell, but that’s ok because we’ve got places to go and people to see….
