Unpacking Hall of discovery

I must say I am quite enjoying having the party split up the way it is. Being able to see Ama interact with Talum when she isn’t trying to set a good example for Walter has been especially gratifying. Talum really can grate on anyone’s nerves. Let’s unpack. Talum’s Memory Writing a character who has…

Upacking Heart of the web

I’m enjoying splitting the characters up into different groups. The party is quite big, so I frequently find characters fading into the background as the story unfolds. Splitting them up into these smaller groups makes it easier to focus on specific characters, and even allows me to change the viewpoint of the story altogether. In…

Unpacking House Guest

Some week soon I will find myself back in my normal rhythm of writing on Monday mornings. Between long weekends and delayed school openings things are not conducive to writing in normal slot! Even with the break in rhythm, however, the joy of creation manages to find a way into my crowded life, so let’s…

Unpacking Inner sanctum

I almost wasn’t able to find the time to write for this past Tuesday, but I’m glad I did! This portion of the journey will funnel us to his meeting on the Senate floor. Satal wants to meet with him first, as well as settle the troubling situations of both Michael and Terrin, before she…

Unpacking a Crack in the World

At last Jeremy has reached The Ravine! I cannot believe how many twists and turns these characters have taken on their journey through The Inner Valleys. It’s been fun watching this world unfold, but I’m very glad to get to see what’s going on in the Senate. Yesterday’s post almost didn’t get written. Between the…

Unpacking Keeping Secrets

I really wanted to have Jeremy actually enter into The Ravine this week, but the characters had something different in mind. We did get to catch some glimpses of how this world is put together, though, so I found it wonderfully enjoyable to write. Let’s unpack. Walter’s tears Walter truly did not want to return…