The Capital Expressions chapter felt like it was beginning to drag, so I determined to move the story forward and change the scenery. This was a fun section to write with Walter and Jeremy, and it marks the first extended conversation a character besides Jeremy has had with Sheilak. Let’s unpack. Satal’s reaction I like…
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Fiction Tuesday – Risk Assessment
Today’s blog is the continuation of, Welcome to the Valleys. If you would like to catch up with the tale, the first section can be found at this link “Well lad, I can’t say you have a timid heart. That’s for certain.” Shortly after their interview with Satal Jeremy and Walter had been escorted to a set of rooms…
Unpacking Closed loop
It seems as though this interview is going on forever. I love the characters, but this chapter needs to come to an end so we can get to the Senate chamber. We might not get to see Satal’s reaction to Jeremy’s bombshell, but that’s ok because we’ve got places to go and people to see….
Fiction Tuesday – Closed Loop
Today’s blog is the continuation of, Welcome to the Valleys. If you would like to catch up with the tale, the first section can be found at this link Walter swallowed slowly, but a spark lit up in his eyes as he then smiled. “Oh, you know about that, do you?” Satal threw her hands up, shaking her head….
Unpacking Hall of discovery
I must say I am quite enjoying having the party split up the way it is. Being able to see Ama interact with Talum when she isn’t trying to set a good example for Walter has been especially gratifying. Talum really can grate on anyone’s nerves. Let’s unpack. Talum’s Memory Writing a character who has…
Fiction Tuesday – Hall of discovery
Today’s blog is the continuation of, Welcome to the Valleys. If you would like to catch up with the tale, the first section can be found at this link Tollen led the two healers through the Great Hall of Healing on the way to his office. The hall itself was a tall, open, space encircled by rows of chairs….
